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TRAIN DREAMS
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EXT PRIMEVAL FOREST DAY
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INT TRAIN DAY
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EXT MOYEA RIVERSIDE - MORNING - YEARS LATER
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INT METHODIST CHURCH - YEARS LATER
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EXT GRAINIER'S ACRE DAY
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EXT ROBINSON GORGE BRIDGE - DAY - SOME TIME LATER
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EXT ROBINSON GORGE BRIDGE / 41 DAYS LATER AFTERNOON
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EXT GRAINIER'S ACRE DAY
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EXT FOREST RAILROAD NIGHT
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EXT GRAINIER'S ACRE - LATE MORNING
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EXT RIVER AFTERNOON
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EXT BONNERS FERRY - ANOTHER DAY
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EXT THE CUT - PRE DAWN
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EXT THE CUT DAY
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EXT THE CUT - ANOTHER DAY
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EXT THE CUT / TUNNEL OPENING DAY
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EXT THE CUT - ANOTHER DAY
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EXT THE CUT / CAMPFIRE NIGHT
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INT TENT NIGHT
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EXT THE CUT MORNING
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EXT THE CUT EVENING
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EXT / INT. GRAINIER'S ACRE DAY
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INT GRAINIER'S CABIN DAY
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EXT GRAINIER'S ACRE DAY
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EXT BONNERS FERRY / FEED BARN DAY
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INT / EXT. GRAINIER'S CABIN MORNING
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EXT THE CUT NIGHT
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EXT THE CUT / ANOTHER MOUNTAIN - ANOTHER DAY
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EXT THE CUT NIGHT
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INT TRAIN DAY
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EXT BURNED FOREST NIGHT
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EXT GRAINIER'S ACRE AFTERNOON
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EXT THE BURNT ACRE MORNING
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EXT THE BURNT FOREST - A LITTLE LATER
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EXT RIVER - ANOTHER DAY
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EXT THE BURNT FOREST - ANOTHER DAY
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EXT RAILROAD TRACKS - SUNSET
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EXT RAILROAD TRACKS NIGHT
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EXT LOGGING VILLAGE - WEEKS LATER
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EXT THE NEW CUT LATER
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EXT THE NEW CUT MORNING
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EXT SPRUCE LAKE EVENING
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EXT GRAINIER'S ACRE - LATE SPRING
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EXT PINKHAM BARN - ANOTHER DAY
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EXT ROAD / WAGON - MONTAGE DAY
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INT GRAINIER'S FIRST CABIN - DREAM
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EXT ROAD / WAGON - ANOTHER DAY
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EXT MEADOW DAY
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EXT SECOND CABIN / ROOF DAY
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INT SECOND CABIN MORNING
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INT / EXT. HALE FIRE LOOKOUT - A LITTLE LATER
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EXT BONNERS FERRY MORNING
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INT / EXT. SECOND CABIN NIGHT
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INT SECOND CABIN CONTINUOUS
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INT SECOND CABIN - THE NEXT MORNING
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EXT WOODS - ANOTHER EVENING
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INT TRAIN - DAY, 1962
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EXT SPOKANE / THEATER - LATER THAT NIGHT
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EXT SPOKANE COUNTY FAIR / FIELD - THE NEXT AFTERNOON
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TRAIN DREAMS
TRAIN DREAMS
TRAIN DREAMS Screenplay by Clint Bentley & Greg Kwedar Based on the book by Denis Johnson
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EXT PRIMEVAL FOREST DAY
EXT. PRIMEVAL FOREST - DAY
EXT. PRIMEVAL FOREST - DAY Camera is attached to a tree, looking up the length of it as the crown sways in the breeze. Then the tree trembles, lists, and starts to fall. The tree CRASHES spectacularly onto the forest floor. A giant
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INT TRAIN DAY
INT. TRAIN - DAY
INT. TRAIN - DAY Grainier, as a young boy (7), riding a train with a note pinned to his chest that reads: FRY, IDAHO. NARRATOR (V.O.) When he was sent by himself to the
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EXT MOYEA RIVERSIDE - MORNING - YEARS LATER
EXT. MOYEA RIVERSIDE - MORNING - YEARS LATER
EXT. MOYEA RIVERSIDE - MORNING - YEARS LATER Grainer -- NOW 17 -- is fishing along the Moyea River. The quiet is broken by a strange sound. A GROANING in the trees. Grainier stops. Listens. Then hears it again.
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INT METHODIST CHURCH - YEARS LATER
INT. METHODIST CHURCH - YEARS LATER
INT. METHODIST CHURCH - YEARS LATER Grainier is in his early 30’s, looking like a stray animal. Singing along to the hymns. It’s a small church. Not more than two dozen in the congregation. NARRATOR (V.O.)
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EXT GRAINIER'S ACRE DAY
EXT. GRAINIER'S ACRE - DAY
EXT. GRAINIER'S ACRE - DAY Grainier and Gladys lay on a blanket surrounded by tall daisies. NARRATOR (V.O.) Not three months later, they were
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EXT ROBINSON GORGE BRIDGE - DAY - SOME TIME LATER
EXT. ROBINSON GORGE BRIDGE - DAY - SOME TIME LATER
EXT. ROBINSON GORGE BRIDGE - DAY - SOME TIME LATER Robert Grainier is working at a log beside a HALF-BUILT BRIDGE, sectioning the log to make beams for the structure. NARRATOR (V.O.) In those years, Grainier’s work
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EXT ROBINSON GORGE BRIDGE / 41 DAYS LATER AFTERNOON
EXT. ROBINSON GORGE BRIDGE / 41 DAYS LATER - AFTERNOON
EXT. ROBINSON GORGE BRIDGE / 41 DAYS LATER - AFTERNOON A little over a month later and the BRIDGE they threw the man from is NOW COMPLETE. A SQUAT LOCOMOTIVE sits ready to test it.
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EXT GRAINIER'S ACRE DAY
EXT. GRAINIER'S ACRE - DAY
EXT. GRAINIER'S ACRE - DAY Grainier walks down a little path off the main road. It winds around through some trees then opens up into a gentle glade. And there is his home. A quiet, idyllic spot. INT. GRAINIER'S CABIN - CONTINUOUS
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EXT FOREST RAILROAD NIGHT
EXT. FOREST RAILROAD - NIGHT
EXT. FOREST RAILROAD - NIGHT A BLACK LOCOMOTIVE hurtles through the dark night. We experience it as if strapped to the front of the train, only seeing what the train's light can reach. The forest spins past in a blur.
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EXT GRAINIER'S ACRE - LATE MORNING
EXT. GRAINIER'S ACRE - LATE MORNING
EXT. GRAINIER'S ACRE - LATE MORNING Gladys is SKINNING A GOAT that hangs from the porch by its hind legs. Working closely with a knife, pulling down the hide. Grainier returns carrying a bundle of cut BIRCH. He walks
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EXT RIVER AFTERNOON
EXT. RIVER - AFTERNOON
EXT. RIVER - AFTERNOON The Grainier family spends an afternoon at the side of a little river together. Splashing in the cold water. Washing dishes. Throwing sticks in the water for Kate to watch them slide downstream.
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EXT BONNERS FERRY - ANOTHER DAY
EXT. BONNERS FERRY - ANOTHER DAY
EXT. BONNERS FERRY - ANOTHER DAY They're walking toward town together -- the little family. Kate lets Grainier carry her now. As they pass the church, a LADY is stepping out and she calls Gladys over to talk. Grainier and Kate walk along, still
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EXT THE CUT - PRE DAWN
EXT. THE CUT - PRE-DAWN
EXT. THE CUT - PRE-DAWN Grainier and some other loggers are hiking into the forest to work for the day. The world is still at this hour, quiet. NARRATOR (V.O.) He once worked alongside a man two
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EXT THE CUT DAY
EXT. THE CUT - DAY
EXT. THE CUT - DAY Grainier works cutting a tree down with another logger who's talking incessantly: APOSTLE FRANK. NARRATOR (V.O.) There was Apostle Frank, a faller
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EXT THE CUT - ANOTHER DAY
EXT. THE CUT - ANOTHER DAY
EXT. THE CUT - ANOTHER DAY Grainier is repairing A BUSTED WHEEL ON A WAGON while a few other loggers stand around watching. APOSTLE FRANK ...and so Jacob wrestled him all
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EXT THE CUT / TUNNEL OPENING DAY
EXT. THE CUT / TUNNEL OPENING - DAY
EXT. THE CUT / TUNNEL OPENING - DAY NARRATOR (V.O.) But at the very heart of The Cut was a man named Arn Peeples. A frail and shrunken gadabout whose
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EXT THE CUT - ANOTHER DAY
EXT. THE CUT - ANOTHER DAY
EXT. THE CUT - ANOTHER DAY RAIN is pouring down. Grainier and other loggers crouched under trees like animals, trying to find what shelter they can. ARN PEEPLES
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EXT THE CUT / CAMPFIRE NIGHT
EXT. THE CUT / CAMPFIRE - NIGHT
EXT. THE CUT / CAMPFIRE - NIGHT Grainier sits by a fire with several others, cleaning the last of his food from his plate with his finger. After a while, Arn arrives at the fire with his plate. He scoops the dregs from their pot onto his plate.
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INT TENT NIGHT
INT. TENT - NIGHT
INT. TENT - NIGHT Grainier crawls into his tent, collapses onto his stomach, exhausted. Arn Peeples is SINGING in the next tent over. A logger yells from another tent. TIRED LOGGER (O.S.)
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EXT THE CUT MORNING
EXT. THE CUT - MORNING
EXT. THE CUT - MORNING Grainier is walking up the hillside carrying an ax. RAIN is turning the ground to slush. He passes a man standing with a TEAM OF HORSES waiting to drag logs down. NARRATOR (V.O.)
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EXT THE CUT EVENING
EXT. THE CUT - EVENING
EXT. THE CUT - EVENING Grainier and Arn Peeples are nailing three BOOTS to three different trees: one for each man killed. Arn holds the nails as Grainier hammers. ARN PEEPLES
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EXT / INT. GRAINIER'S ACRE DAY
EXT. / INT. GRAINIER'S ACRE - DAY
EXT. / INT. GRAINIER'S ACRE - DAY Grainier, tired, steps up to his home. The cabin is different than the last time we saw it. A clothesline has moved. Some plants have been added, others removed. GRAINIER
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INT GRAINIER'S CABIN DAY
INT. GRAINIER'S CABIN - DAY
INT. GRAINIER'S CABIN - DAY Grainier and Gladys in bed together in the long part of the afternoon. She lays behind him with her arms around his chest while he watches Kate nap on a pallet on the floor, curled on her side like a little animal.
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EXT GRAINIER'S ACRE DAY
EXT. GRAINIER'S ACRE - DAY
EXT. GRAINIER'S ACRE - DAY Grainier and Kate are playing in the tall grass. Grainier is crawling on his hands and knees, pretending to be some wild animal. Kate giggles and runs around. As they're playing, he HOWLS like a wolf. She stops at this.
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EXT BONNERS FERRY / FEED BARN DAY
EXT. BONNERS FERRY / FEED BARN - DAY
EXT. BONNERS FERRY / FEED BARN - DAY Another day: Grainier loads feed sacks onto a horse cart. The work is backbreaking and monotonous. NARRATOR (V.O.) Grainier tried to find work closer
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INT / EXT. GRAINIER'S CABIN MORNING
INT. / EXT. GRAINIER'S CABIN - MORNING
INT. / EXT. GRAINIER'S CABIN - MORNING Grainier is dressed to leave for the cut. Kate plays on the floor of the cabin with a little wooden toy. He hugs and kisses her goodbye. She doesn't understand it and so isn't bothered, just says bye bye.
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EXT THE CUT NIGHT
EXT. THE CUT - NIGHT
EXT. THE CUT - NIGHT Grainier sits around a little fire with a few other loggers as the evening turns to night. The mountainside is cut clean, shorn close, all the big trees gone. NARRATOR (V.O.)
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EXT THE CUT / ANOTHER MOUNTAIN - ANOTHER DAY
EXT. THE CUT / ANOTHER MOUNTAIN - ANOTHER DAY
EXT. THE CUT / ANOTHER MOUNTAIN - ANOTHER DAY A THICK DEAD BRANCH hangs high in a Larch. A SNAG, dangling from the canopy. Beneath the tree and all over this mountainside, loggers are making short work of the trees here.
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EXT THE CUT NIGHT
EXT. THE CUT - NIGHT
EXT. THE CUT - NIGHT TWO DAYS LATER. Arn Peeples now lays DEAD on a bed out in the open under the trees, sheets pulled up under his chin as if he's just sleeping. Grainier and the rest of the crew stand around him. No one
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INT TRAIN DAY
INT. TRAIN - DAY
INT. TRAIN - DAY Grainier opens his eyes from this dream. His head against the window on a passenger train. He's been sleeping. He's coming back from The Cut. Everyone on the train car is agitated. Most are pressed up
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EXT BURNED FOREST NIGHT
EXT. BURNED FOREST - NIGHT
EXT. BURNED FOREST - NIGHT The Fire has moved farther north. Grainier walks along the Moyea River toward his home -- a HANDKERCHIEF tied over his nose and mouth to strain the smoke.
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EXT GRAINIER'S ACRE AFTERNOON
EXT. GRAINIER'S ACRE - AFTERNOON
EXT. GRAINIER'S ACRE - AFTERNOON Grainier stands in the place where his cabin once was -- now only a patch of dark ground surrounded by the black spikes of spruce. His mind is far away.
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EXT THE BURNT ACRE MORNING
EXT. THE BURNT ACRE - MORNING
EXT. THE BURNT ACRE - MORNING In first light, Grainier lays on his side, staring out. As if he didn't sleep all night. Something in the sky catches his eye. He looks up to see it come into view. A SCARF. Gladys' scarf. Just sailing past. He
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EXT THE BURNT FOREST - A LITTLE LATER
EXT. THE BURNT FOREST - A LITTLE LATER
EXT. THE BURNT FOREST - A LITTLE LATER Grainier follows Ignatius Jack as they track through the burned forest. Green is starting to show across the ground. Ignatius Jack carries his rifle. They don't speak as they
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EXT RIVER - ANOTHER DAY
EXT. RIVER - ANOTHER DAY
EXT. RIVER - ANOTHER DAY Grainier kneels to the river, washing his hands in the water. In the distance, he hears A WOMAN'S VOICE talking softly. Gladys' voice. He listens. Until slowly it fades away on the wind.
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EXT THE BURNT FOREST - ANOTHER DAY
EXT. THE BURNT FOREST - ANOTHER DAY
EXT. THE BURNT FOREST - ANOTHER DAY Grainier is cutting down a small tree with an ax, making logs. He senses something and stops cold. He turns. Behind him, in a clearing, an ELK stares at him. With wide antlers and shag
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EXT RAILROAD TRACKS - SUNSET
EXT. RAILROAD TRACKS - SUNSET
EXT. RAILROAD TRACKS - SUNSET We see Ignatius Jack, staggering along some tracks. NARRATOR (V.O.) Sometime after dark Ignatius Jack wandered off and managed to get
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EXT RAILROAD TRACKS NIGHT
EXT. RAILROAD TRACKS - NIGHT
EXT. RAILROAD TRACKS - NIGHT Soaring over train tracks, inches from the crossties and rails. A vision from the nose of a train. The headlight doesn't do much against the dark even as it rushes through the night.
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EXT LOGGING VILLAGE - WEEKS LATER
EXT. LOGGING VILLAGE - WEEKS LATER
EXT. LOGGING VILLAGE - WEEKS LATER Grainier follows a line of men through a LOGGER'S VILLAGE. The place is filled with motorized engines, many still run by steam. Tractors. Chainsaws. The space buzzes, mechanical and angry.
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EXT THE NEW CUT LATER
EXT. THE NEW CUT - LATER
EXT. THE NEW CUT - LATER Grainier is standing over a chainsaw. Trying to recall the instructions he was given. He looks around for help. Finally a younger man shows up and pushes past him. YOUNG LOGGER #1
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EXT THE NEW CUT MORNING
EXT. THE NEW CUT - MORNING
EXT. THE NEW CUT - MORNING Grainier is walking into the woods in the early light with some others. He notices some OLD BOOTS NAILED TO A TREE and stops. They've been there so long they seem to be becoming part of the tree.
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EXT SPRUCE LAKE EVENING
EXT. SPRUCE LAKE - EVENING
EXT. SPRUCE LAKE - EVENING Weeks later, Grainier is walking home from The Cut. He stops for the night at SPRUCE LAKE, a high lake in the mountains, reflecting back up to the sky the forest that encircles it. He stares at the beauty of it.
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EXT GRAINIER'S ACRE - LATE SPRING
EXT. GRAINIER'S ACRE - LATE SPRING
EXT. GRAINIER'S ACRE - LATE SPRING The land that was burned has almost fully recovered now. As Grainier walks, clusters of orange butterflies explode off the blackish purple piles of bear scat and flutter magically like leaves without trees.
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EXT PINKHAM BARN - ANOTHER DAY
EXT. PINKHAM BARN - ANOTHER DAY
EXT. PINKHAM BARN - ANOTHER DAY Grainier is loading sacks of cornmeal onto a wagon with a boy named AVERY, who is only 17 but dwarfs Grainier. Avery loads another sack onto the wagon. He turns back and lifts a third, but IMMEDIATELY DROPS IT.
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EXT ROAD / WAGON - MONTAGE DAY
EXT. ROAD / WAGON - MONTAGE - DAY
EXT. ROAD / WAGON - MONTAGE - DAY Grainier drives the wagon slowly down a road. The back is STACKED WITH FURNITURE while TWO CHILDREN run alongside. NARRATOR (V.O.) They sold Grainier their wagon and
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INT GRAINIER'S FIRST CABIN - DREAM
INT. GRAINIER'S FIRST CABIN - DREAM
INT. GRAINIER'S FIRST CABIN - DREAM The SOUND of the Spokane International. The cabin looks as it did BEFORE THE FIRE. Filled with the belongings of the Grainier family. The moan of the train grows closer. Through the windows, the
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EXT ROAD / WAGON - ANOTHER DAY
EXT. ROAD / WAGON - ANOTHER DAY
EXT. ROAD / WAGON - ANOTHER DAY Grainier rides along in his wagon, his mind on the visitation. Ahead of him, walking along the road: A WOMAN ABOUT HIS AGE, carrying a large rucksack. She's dressed in green pants and
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EXT MEADOW DAY
EXT. MEADOW - DAY
EXT. MEADOW - DAY At last they come to a SMALL MEADOW. On the other side is a granite escarpment at the foot of the mountains. He stops the horses and he and Claire step down from the wagon. The horses browse in the tall grass.
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EXT SECOND CABIN / ROOF DAY
EXT. SECOND CABIN / ROOF - DAY
EXT. SECOND CABIN / ROOF - DAY Grainier is back at his cabin. Repairing some shingles up on the roof. The wind shifts, blows in COLD FROM THE NORTH. Grainier looks
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INT SECOND CABIN MORNING
INT. SECOND CABIN - MORNING
INT. SECOND CABIN - MORNING In the soft light of morning, Grainier lays still in his bed. Eyes closed. Mouth hanging open. No movement at all. Then his eyes softly flutter open and he takes a deep breath.
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INT / EXT. HALE FIRE LOOKOUT - A LITTLE LATER
INT. / EXT. HALE FIRE LOOKOUT - A LITTLE LATER
INT. / EXT. HALE FIRE LOOKOUT - A LITTLE LATER Inside, the lookout tower is spare but comfortable. More books than clothes. More windows than walls. Maps of the forest spread across a table. A simple cot in the corner. GRAINIER
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EXT BONNERS FERRY MORNING
EXT. BONNERS FERRY - MORNING
EXT. BONNERS FERRY - MORNING Grainier is walking out of town with some sundries he's bought that morning. He walks past the METHODIST CHURCH. Where he met Gladys. He hears singing inside and stops. Watches the church a
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INT / EXT. SECOND CABIN NIGHT
INT. / EXT. SECOND CABIN - NIGHT
INT. / EXT. SECOND CABIN - NIGHT The moon rises near midnight and hangs above Queen Mountain. Grainier is alone in his cabin. He's mending some old pants, working a needle back and forth through the corduroy. Birch burns in the stove.
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INT SECOND CABIN CONTINUOUS
INT. SECOND CABIN - CONTINUOUS
INT. SECOND CABIN - CONTINUOUS Grainier lays her on his pallet on the floor. He sets the lamp on the table, illuminating the room, and prepares to splint the broken leg with kindling. He pulls off his undershirt and tears it into strips.
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INT SECOND CABIN - THE NEXT MORNING
INT. SECOND CABIN - THE NEXT MORNING
INT. SECOND CABIN - THE NEXT MORNING Grainier opens his eyes near daylight, a much smaller sound bringing him awake. Kate has stirred. She is leaving out the window. GRAINIER
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EXT WOODS - ANOTHER EVENING
EXT. WOODS - ANOTHER EVENING
EXT. WOODS - ANOTHER EVENING Grainier walks through the woods, searching, listening. NARRATOR (V.O.) He spent many days and evenings wandering the forests and fields of
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INT TRAIN - DAY, 1962
INT. TRAIN - DAY, 1962
INT. TRAIN - DAY, 1962 Grainier rides a passenger train along the edge of a forest. The trees open, revealing THE ROBINSON GORGE BRIDGE in the valley below -- now a web of steel running across the canyon. A highway stretching away from it toward cities unknown to
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EXT SPOKANE / THEATER - LATER THAT NIGHT
EXT. SPOKANE / THEATER - LATER THAT NIGHT
EXT. SPOKANE / THEATER - LATER THAT NIGHT As he approaches a theater entrance, he passes a selection of carnival posters announcing oddities and magic. CARNIVAL BARKER ...A camel that spits out gold from
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EXT SPOKANE COUNTY FAIR / FIELD - THE NEXT AFTERNOON
EXT. SPOKANE COUNTY FAIR / FIELD - THE NEXT AFTERNOON
EXT. SPOKANE COUNTY FAIR / FIELD - THE NEXT AFTERNOON Grainier finds himself on a field near the fairgrounds. A sign on a truck advertises four dollar flights. A little crowd has gathered around a BIPLANE parked on the field. A flimsy ordeal with wings that seem to be made of
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Train Dreams

After a wildfire destroys his home and family, a solitary logger refuses to leave his burned acre, listening for impossible visitations of the wife and daughter he lost — until a miraculous, wolf-like return of his child forces him to reconcile grief, guilt, and a life lived in the shadow of the forest. Other loglines ›

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Overview

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Unique Selling Point

The script's unique selling proposition is its deeply introspective and poetic exploration of the human experience, set against the backdrop of the rugged American Northwest. The script's focus on the inner lives of its characters, combined with its lyrical and visually striking style, sets it apart from more conventional dramas in the genre. The script's themes of loss, grief, and the search for meaning in a changing world will resonate with audiences seeking a thoughtful and emotionally engaging cinematic experience.

AI Verdict

OpenAI
 Recommend
Score 8.0
Gemini
 Recommend
Score 8.5
Grok
 Recommend
Score 8.3
DeepSeek
 Recommend
Score 8.3
Claude
 Recommend
Score 8.5
Average Score: 8.3
Key Takeaways
For the Writer:
To strengthen the script's narrative coherence and emotional resonance, focus on clarifying the ambiguous supernatural elements—such as the Chinese laborer's hauntings and the wolf-girl transformation—to better align them with Grainier's psychological state, ensuring they serve as metaphors for grief rather than confusing literal events. Additionally, address pacing issues in the middle sections by consolidating repetitive logging vignettes and providing clearer resolutions to subplots like racial violence, which will enhance the overall flow and thematic unity, making the story more impactful and easier to adapt.
For Executives:
The script has significant artistic value as a poetic, character-driven drama with festival potential and appeal to literary audiences, driven by strong emotional core and unique magical realism elements. However, risks include slow pacing that could bore mainstream viewers, unresolved subplots and thematic ambiguities that complicate production and audience understanding, potentially limiting commercial viability to niche markets rather than broader box office success, and the need for tightening to avoid perceptions of pretentiousness in adaptation.
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Story Facts
Genres:
Drama 60% Romance 15% Fantasy 15% Western 30% Action 10%

Setting: Early 20th century to 1962, Primarily in rural Idaho and Washington, including logging sites, cabins, and towns.

Themes: The Search for Meaning and Belonging, Loss and Grief, Identity and Self-Discovery, The Passage of Time and Mortality, The Power and Indifference of Nature, Societal Violence and Prejudice, The Cycles of Life and Renewal, The Elusive Nature of Truth and Memory

Conflict & Stakes: Grainier's internal struggle with grief over the loss of his family, the dangers of logging, and the search for meaning in a rapidly changing world.

Mood: Melancholic and reflective

Standout Features:

  • Unique Hook: The transformation of Grainier's daughter into a wolf-like figure symbolizes the loss of innocence and the connection to nature.
  • Major Twist: The revelation of Grainier's daughter being alive in a transformed state adds a supernatural element to the narrative.
  • Distinctive Setting: The backdrop of early 20th-century logging in the Pacific Northwest provides a rich historical context.
  • Innovative Ideas: The screenplay intertwines personal loss with broader themes of environmental change and industrialization.
  • Unique Characters: Characters like Arn Peeples and Ignatius Jack offer philosophical insights and depth to the narrative.

Comparable Scripts: The Revenant, Into the Wild, The Old Man and the Sea, The Road, The Bear, The Grapes of Wrath, The Secret Life of Walter Mitty, The Last of the Mohicans, The Call of the Wild

Script Level Analysis

Writer Exec

This section delivers a top-level assessment of the screenplay’s strengths and weaknesses — covering overall quality (P/C/R/HR), character development, emotional impact, thematic depth, narrative inconsistencies, and the story’s core philosophical conflict. It helps identify what’s resonating, what needs refinement, and how the script aligns with professional standards.

Screenplay Insights

Breaks down your script along various categories.

Overall Score: 8.04
Key Suggestions:
To strengthen the script from a creative standpoint, focus on deepening the emotional layers of supporting characters like Ignatius Jack and Arn Peeples by adding richer backstories and motivations, which will enhance audience investment and thematic resonance. Additionally, address pacing issues in the middle sections by tightening dialogue and emphasizing key emotional beats, ensuring a more dynamic flow that maintains engagement without losing the story's introspective depth. This will make the narrative more impactful and cohesive, particularly in integrating surreal elements with Grainier's personal journey.
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Story Critique

Big-picture feedback on the story’s clarity, stakes, cohesion, and engagement.

Key Suggestions:
To enhance 'Train Dreams' from a creative and craft perspective, focus on streamlining the pacing to eliminate drag in non-essential scenes, ensuring supernatural elements like the wolf-girl are more tightly woven into the themes of loss and memory for greater clarity and emotional resonance. Additionally, introducing a clearer central conflict for Robert Grainier and expanding character interactions through dialogue will strengthen the narrative flow and deepen audience connections, making the story more engaging and impactful overall.
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Characters

Explores the depth, clarity, and arc of the main and supporting characters.

Key Suggestions:
The character analysis reveals that while Grainier is a compelling protagonist with strong emotional depth, the script could benefit from further developing his backstory and internal conflicts to enhance audience engagement. For supporting characters like Gladys and Arn, incorporating more nuanced interactions and emotional layers would add richness, making the narrative more resonant. Focus on tightening character arcs, especially in scenes of loss and redemption, to create a more cohesive and impactful story that balances introspection with action.
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Emotional Analysis

Breaks down the emotional journey of the audience across the script.

Key Suggestions:
To improve the script's emotional craft, focus on balancing the distribution of emotions by integrating more moments of joy, wonder, and humor, especially in the latter half, to counteract the risk of audience fatigue from prolonged melancholy. Deepen secondary characters' backstories and internal conflicts to enhance empathy and complexity, and refine pacing by adding gradual emotional build-ups to key scenes, ensuring a more dynamic and engaging narrative that maintains viewer investment without overwhelming them with consistent despair.
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Goals and Philosophical Conflict

Evaluates character motivations, obstacles, and sources of tension throughout the plot.

Key Suggestions:
The analysis reveals that Grainier's internal and external goals are resolved late in the script (80-90%), which effectively builds emotional depth but risks feeling drawn out. To enhance craft, focus on weaving philosophical conflicts like 'Progress vs. Preservation' earlier through subtle symbolism and character interactions, ensuring a more balanced pace and stronger audience connection to his journey of grief and acceptance, ultimately making the narrative more engaging and impactful.
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Themes

Analysis of the themes of the screenplay and how well they’re expressed.

Key Suggestions:
The script masterfully weaves themes of loss, identity, and the passage of time to explore the human search for meaning, but to elevate its craft, focus on refining the pacing in montage sequences and dream-like flashbacks to avoid diluting emotional intensity. Enhancing character interactions, particularly Grainier's relationships with secondary figures like Arn Peeples and Ignatius Jack, could provide deeper insights into his internal journey, making the narrative more engaging and ensuring the primary theme resonates more powerfully with audiences.
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Logic & Inconsistencies

Highlights any contradictions, plot holes, or logic gaps that may confuse viewers.

Key Suggestions:
To strengthen the script's emotional authenticity and narrative flow, focus on resolving major plot holes and character inconsistencies, such as the abrupt wolf-girl revelation, by integrating more gradual buildup or symbolic elements that align with Grainier's reflective nature. Streamline redundant motifs and voice-over exposition to emphasize visual storytelling, enhancing immersion and allowing character-driven moments to resonate more deeply with audiences.
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Scene Analysis

All of your scenes analyzed individually and compared, so you can zero in on what to improve.

Scene-Level Percentile Chart
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Other Analyses

Writer Exec

This section looks at the extra spark — your story’s voice, style, world, and the moments that really stick. These insights might not change the bones of the script, but they can make it more original, more immersive, and way more memorable. It’s where things get fun, weird, and wonderfully you.

Unique Voice

Assesses the distinctiveness and personality of the writer's voice.

Key Suggestions:
The script's poetic and introspective voice is a major strength, effectively evoking nostalgia and deep emotional resonance through vivid imagery and philosophical undertones. To enhance it, focus on tightening the balance between introspective narration and plot-driven action in key scenes to prevent pacing issues, ensuring that the voice amplifies character development without overwhelming the narrative flow, ultimately making the story more accessible and impactful for audiences.
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Writer's Craft

Analyzes the writing to help the writer be aware of their skill and improve.

Key Suggestions:
The screenplay excels in emotional depth and evocative imagery, but to elevate it, focus on refining dialogue to incorporate more subtext for nuanced character revelations, deepening backstories to enhance relatability, and tightening scene structures for better pacing and tension. These improvements will amplify the script's introspective themes and make the narrative more compelling and immersive.
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Memorable Lines
Spotlights standout dialogue lines with emotional or thematic power.
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Tropes
Highlights common or genre-specific tropes found in the script.
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World Building

Evaluates the depth, consistency, and immersion of the story's world.

Key Suggestions:
The world building in this script is a powerful asset, richly evoking themes of loss, renewal, and human-nature conflict through detailed physical and cultural elements. To enhance the script's craft, focus on tightening the integration of world elements with character development, ensuring that the episodic structure doesn't overshadow emotional arcs—consider streamlining montages and voice-overs to heighten tension and avoid exposition overload, making the story more immersive and character-driven for better audience connection.
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Correlations

Identifies patterns in scene scores.

Key Suggestions:
The script's strength lies in its profound emotional depth and character introspection, drawing from themes of loss and nostalgia, but it could be enhanced by incorporating more conflict and plot progression into reflective scenes to avoid a slow pace and ensure that internal explorations drive the story forward, making the narrative more engaging and balanced.
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Loglines
Presents logline variations based on theme, genre, and hook.
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