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F O R YO U R C O N S I D E R AT I O N 2 0 1 0 BEST ORIGINAL SCREENPLAY David Seidler THE KING'S SPEECH Screenplay by
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INT. CORRIDOR, WEMBLEY STADIUM - DAY CLOSE ON a man's hand clutching a woman's hand. Woman’s mouth whispers into man's ear. BBC NEWS READER (V.O.) 58 British Colonies and Dominions
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INT. GREEN ROOM - DAY Nervous eyes flick towards a tunnel leading to a bright light. CLOSE ON - BERTIE - the Duke of York, second son of the King; his handsome, sensitive, features look terrified.
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EXT. ROYAL PODIUM - DAY HAND-HELD CAMERA, BERTIE’S POV: far ahead, at a seemingly impossible distance, is the huge intimidating microphone, the only thing between the terrified observer and 100,000 people. Silence falls over the stadium.
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EXT. ROYAL PODIUM - DAY Bertie is frozen at the microphone. His neck and jaw muscles contract and quiver. 4 BERTIE
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EXT. 145 PICADILLY - NEW DAY Establishing shot of an imposing Georgian edifice, opposite Hyde Park Corner. In the foreground people pay their respects at the WWI monument with fresh wreaths. A Rover sedan - definitive doctor’s car of the era - arrives.
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EXT. HARLEY STREET - NEW DAY A thick grey wet blanket... Out of which materializes the moisture splattered hood of a large AUSTIN. Elizabeth, inside, determinedly glances out.
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INT. WAITING ROOM, LOGUE’S CHAMBERS - CONTINUOUS Umbrella stand, coat rack, wooden waiting bench: that’s all. She looks about. The area is devoid of life. Coughs. No response. Calls imperiously: 8
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EXT. SOUTH KENSINGTON STREET - LATE AFTERNOON A well-used Morris Oxford pulls up, driven by Lionel’s eldest son - LAURIE. Lionel is the passenger. As he gets out: LIONEL Still sounds a bit rough.
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EXT. YORK HOUSE, 145 PICADILLY - NIGHT Lights are on in the upper windows. A double-decker bus passes on the wet street. ELIZABETH (V.O.) Tomorrow, Chapter IV.
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INT. STAIRCASE - CONTINUOUS As they leave for the night: ELIZABETH Will she be there? BERTIE
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INT. A STAGE - DAY In a church or school hall, out of hours. MUFFLED VOICE (O.S.) Now? From the auditorium:
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INT. GROUND FLOOR ENTRANCE, 146 HARLEY STREET The Yorks enter the tiny elevator. Bertie shuts the inner gate. ELIZABETH (indicating outer gate)
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INT. LOGUE’S WAITING ROOM - DAY Bertie and Elizabeth enter. She explains in a whisper: ELIZABETH No receptionist. He likes to keep things simple.
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INT. LOGUE’S CONSULTATION ROOM - DAY A different universe from the Spartan waiting area. A world of books - piles of them spilling everywhere. Two slightly shabby, but comfortable armchairs. Well-worn Turkish rug. 19
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INT. LOGUE’S WAITING ROOM - DAY Elizabeth looks up at Bertie hopefully. BERTIE No Elizabeth nods and rises. They walk towards the door
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INT. BERTIE’S STUDY, YORK HOUSE - NEW NIGHT Bertie lies on a chaise longue, smoking. BERTIE (to himself) Lying bastard.
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INT. LOGUE’S CONSULTATION ROOM - NEW DAY Bertie and Elizabeth have returned to the consultation room. BERTIE Strictly business. No personal nonsense.
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INT. MIDLAND FACTORY - NEW DAY Huge industrial wheels whir noisily in neutral as WORKERS line up dutifully to hear the visiting Royal. Bertie’s lips move, but due to the racket he cannot be heard. Elizabeth watches in relief.
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EXT. PRIVATE LANDING STRIP, SANDRINGHAM ESTATE - NEW DAY Bertie waits beside a shooting break, a stiff breeze whipping his coat, as a small plane lands and taxis. While he waits Bertie practises breathing exercises. The cockpit canopy slides back and - DAVID - leaps out,
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INT./EXT. CAR (SHOOTING BREAK) ON SANDRINGHAM LANE - CONTINUOUS David drives. Badly. DAVID Old bugger’s doing this on purpose.
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INT. LIBRARY, SANDRINGHAM - CONTINUOUS David is on the phone. Bertie enters. DAVID I’m on with Wallis! (continues as though
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INT. KING’S BEDROOM, SANDRINGHAM - NIGHT Lord Dawson closes the King’s eyes. COSMO LANG We commend our brother George to the mercy of God, our Maker and
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INT. LOGUE’S CONSULTATION ROOM - NEW DAY Lionel is at his desk listening to the radio. A news reader is talking about the death of King George V. Two of his sons sprawl on the floor. Valentine is studying for the School Certificate. Antony, the youngest, is taking
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INT. WAITING ROOM TO LOGUE’S CHAMBERS - CONTINUOUS The door opens. Bertie is on the other side. The two men stare at each other, not sure what to say. LIONEL Bertie, they told me not to expect
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INT. LOGUE’S CONSULTATION ROOM - CONTINUOUS LIONEL Do you feel like working today? Bertie notices the plane left behind by Logue’s sons. BERTIE
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EXT. WHITEHALL - DAY David, very solemn, Bertie - pale and fragile, their brothers Henry and George all salute as they pass the Cenotaph. The crowd is silent. Lionel, Myrtle, and all three boys are part of the crowd,
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EXT. AUSTIN DRIVING THRU SCOTTISH ESTATE - NEW DAY BERTIE (O.S.) “I sifted seven thick-stalked thistles through strong thick sieves. I sifted seven...”
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INT. BALLROOM, BALMORAL - DAY A weekend house party. Drinks at teatime. Five or six friends dance to a gramophone. A couple are already drunk. At the epicenter, David, the very picture of insouciance, and WALLIS, clinging to his arm, dripping in jewelry. Wallis’
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INT. DRAWING ROOM/PORTRAIT GALLERY, BALMORAL - DAY Elizabeth is standing in front of a canvas of George IV when Churchill arrives at her side. ELIZABETH Don’t tell me I behaved badly, Mr
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INT. CORRIDOR, BALMORAL - CONTINUOUS Bertie catches his brother. BERTIE I’ve been trying to see you... DAVID
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INT. SERVANT’S CORRIDOR/WINE CELLAR - DAY David is hunting for a bottle of champagne for Wallis in the wine cellar. BERTIE And you’ve put that woman into our
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INT. LOGUE’S CONSULTATION ROOM, HARLEY STREET - NEW DAY Bertie stands shattered, lost in painful memory. BERTIE All that work, down the drain. My own brother... I couldn’t say...I
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EXT. REGENT’S PARK ORNAMENTAL GARDEN - DAY Bertie and Logue come into view talking. Bertie with his homburg pulled low, scarf wrapped high. The park is empty and bleak on this winter’s day. One can feel the cold chill; puffs of steam punctuating their words like smoke signals.
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EXT. BACK GARDEN ENTRANCE, 10 DOWNING STREET/HORSE GUARDS PARADE - DAY A car pulls up. A bundled figure hurries out and slips in thru the garden entrance. INT. BALDWIN’S STUDY, 10 DOWNING STREET - DAY
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INT. LIVING ROOM, LOGUE APARTMENT - NIGHT The family is listening to a favorite radio show. MYRTLE What’s the matter, love? LIONEL
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INT. HALLWAY, 145 PICCADILLY - CONTINUOUS Lionel is shown to a chair in the hall to wait. Footsteps echo. Bertie’s Equerry, dressed in military uniform, comes in. He is scrupulously polite.
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INT. DAVID’S DRAWING ROOM, THE FORT - DAY Bertie waits nervously for David. David enters, looking sunken. BERTIE David! Thank God. You look
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INT. STUDY, WINDSOR CASTLE - NIGHT David sits at his desk on which sits a BBC microphone. As always he speaks with beautiful fluency. DAVID (V.O. RADIO FILTER) You all know the reasons which have
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INT. HALLWAY. 145 PICCADILLY - NEW DAY Bertie is in full regalia of an Admiral of the Fleet’s uniform. DAVID (V.O. RADIO FILTER) ...and with his fine qualities...
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INT. HALLWAY, YORK HOUSE - THAT DAY Elizabeth is with her daughters, preparing for the move to Buckingham Palace. The girls are tidying away their toy horses. LILLIBET
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INT. BERTIE’S STUDY, YORK HOUSE - NIGHT Bertie valiantly tries to make sense of his new dispatch box filled with state papers, seated at his desk. It is late at night. Elizabeth enters, in night clothes.
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EXT. LOGUE HOME, SOUTH KENSINGTON - NEW DAY Re-establishing shot. Two large cars wait at the curb-side. INT. PARLOUR, LOGUE APARTMENT - CONTINUOUS A knock at the front door. Two figures can be seen outlined in the frosted glass door.
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INT. LOGUE’S STUDY - CONTINUOUS The two men enter and sit down. A moment of uncertainty. Then Bertie blurts. BERTIE Here’s your shilling, Logue
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INT. PARLOUR, LOGUE APARTMENT - CONTINUOUS Myrtle has entered, she is flabbergasted. MYRTLE Your... your... ELIZABETH
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INT. LOGUE’S STUDY - CONTINUOUS The men listen to their wives’ conversation. BERTIE Logue, we can’t stay here all day. LIONEL
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INT. PARLOUR, LOGUE APARTMENT - CONTINUOUS Logue enters, pretending total innocence and surprise, followed by Bertie. LIONEL Oh! Hello, Myrtle darling! You’re
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EXT. WESTMINSTER ABBEY - DAY To establish. Preparations are being made in the street for the coronation - spectator stands are complete and fabric is being dressed. INT. WESTMINSTER ABBEY - DAY
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INT. WESTMINSTER ABBEY - THAT NIGHT Footsteps resonate. Lionel enters. Ahead, he sees Cosmo Lang quietly conferring with Bertie. As Lionel approached, Cosmo Lang slips away. LIONEL
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INT. SCREENING ROOM, BUCKINGHAM PALACE - NEW DAY On the screen: archive - Pathe newsreel footage of the Coronation. The Royal Family watches: Bertie, Elizabeth, Lilibet and Margaret. Cosmo Lang and his assistant are in attendance.
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INT. MEETING ROOM, BUCKINGHAM PALACE - NEW DAY Baldwin enters, looking pale and tired, to see Bertie. BERTIE Good Morning Mr Baldwin. BALDWIN
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INT. LOGUE’S PARLOUR - DAY The Logue family are sat around the wireless. CHAMBERLAIN I am speaking to you from the cabinet room of 10 Downing Street.
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INT. - LOGUE’S CAR - DAY Laurie drives Logue. Out the window he sees sandbags being piled round government buildings. LIONEL (peering up into the sky)
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INT. STATE ROOMS, BUCKINGHAM PALACE - CONTINUOUS Bertie, Lionel, and Elizabeth walk towards the microphone. A corgi barks as they approach. The first room has a large speaker and chairs arranged for listening to the broadcast. Lang, Prime Minister Neville
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INT. BROADCASTING BOOTH - DAY The dreaded BBC microphone, in a surprisingly small room. It is arranged so Bertie can stand up as he speaks, the way Logue likes it. The ceiling has been lowered and it has been decorated in cheerful colours. As a podium for the speech an
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INT. CONTROL ROOM, BBC BROADCASTING HOUSE - DAY The technicians in their suits, ties and scientific looking white overcoats, wearing bulky headphones, monitoring daunting banks of valves and dials listen with growing apprehension to the silence broken only by crackling static.
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INT./EXT. MONTAGE OF VARIOUS LOCATIONS The assembled dignitaries at Buckingham Palace, Myrtle with two of the boys, people listening to radios in homes, pubs, factories. A group of soldiers, including Antony Logue. Queen Mary sitting in her State Apartments, David and Wallis
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INT. CONTROL ROOM, BBC BROADCASTING HOUSE - DAY Technicians break in to spontaneous applause. INT. BROADCASTING BOOTH, BUCKINGHAM PALACE - CONTINUOUS Lionel and Bertie stare at each other. 88
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INT. STATE ROOMS, BUCKINGHAM PALACE - CONTINUOUS Bertie heads towards the listening room. Elizabeth goes to Bertie and kisses him tenderly on the cheek. ELIZABETH
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EXT. BALCONY, BUCKINGHAM PALACE - DAY The King, his Queen and their children wave to the crowds, receiving their adulation and love. Bertie glances upwards. POV - silver dirigibles hover protectively.
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The King's speech

A stammering Prince finds unexpected strength and self-discovery through an unconventional speech therapist, transforming him into a courageous King. Other loglines ›

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Overview

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Unique Selling Point

The King's Speech stands out from other historical dramas by its deep exploration of the personal struggles and emotional journey of its central character, Bertie, as he transitions from a reluctant heir to a confident and inspirational leader. The screenplay's unique blend of historical accuracy, character-driven narrative, and innovative use of language creates a compelling and immersive viewing experience that resonates with audiences on multiple levels.

AI Verdict

How to read these: in industry coverage, Pass is the default outcome for the majority of professional scripts, and Consider means the reader stayed in the room. Industry-wide, the median professional evaluation sits at a 6 — scores of 8+ are rare everywhere, on purpose.

Synthesis Where readers agree and split
8.5

The script earns a strong advocacy position through its distinctive central relationship and emotionally precise broadcast payoff, and it requires targeted work on middle-act agency before it can clear the top band.

Read as Prestige
Genres Drama5 Historical5 Biopic5

A prestige historical drama aiming for emotional accumulation through a restrained two-hander, where the protagonist's internal struggle is the primary dramatic engine and historical events provide pressure rather than plot.

Why not lower

The central relationship, controlled tonal blend, and formally satisfying broadcast payoff provide substantial reasons to advocate for the script despite its structural softness.

Why not higher

The succession crisis and repeated demonstrations of therapeutic progress keep the middle from matching the precision and emotional force of the opening and climax.

Rewrite map

A prestige historical drama anchored by a championable central relationship that needs targeted revision to convert middle-act therapy repetition and political exposition into active protagonist choices.

Read as Prestige

Start here

Converting the middle act's therapy insights into dramatized action by giving Bertie a concrete external objective addresses both the repetitive training beats and the passive political framing, making his eventual broadcast feel earned through accumulated choice rather than reported progress.

What's working 1
Microphone and stammer as recurring dramatic devices

The script uses the physical mechanics of speech and the looming microphone to create a visible measure of Bertie's change, making the final broadcast feel like a return to a remembered threshold rather than a new scene.

Protect while fixing 1
Bertie-Lionel consultation-room sparring

Condensing therapy beats or shifting focus to external political action risks flattening the comic and emotional texture that makes the relationship the script's engine.

When tightening the middle act, preserve the rhythm of the consultation-room exchanges as self-contained units of status play and trust-building rather than trimming them to serve plot mechanics.

Fix first 2
Middle-act progression relies on repeated therapy beats rather than active choices

The reader senses the training advancing in place, so the middle act's forward pull slackens as scenes entertain in isolation but fail to accumulate consequence.

Root cause

The script dramatizes progress through repeated trial-and-reward cycles in the consultation room without giving Bertie a clear external goal or cost that changes between sessions.

One direction

Convert therapeutic insights into forward action by giving Bertie one or two sequences where he must navigate a public or familial situation without Lionel, letting the stammer's cost be visible in the outcome.

Political stakes arrive as explanatory blocks rather than active pressure Less critical

The reader receives the historical stakes as background information, so the approaching war and constitutional crisis register as context instead of urgency.

Root cause

The external threat is conveyed through extended speeches and archival montage rather than through choices or consequences the protagonist must actively face.

One direction

Thread concrete signs of the coming crisis into Bertie’s existing routines or route the same information through an external pressure that forces a decision, converting exposition into a decision point.

Quick credibility wins 1
Standardize character name cues and fix proofreading slips

Run a consistency pass to unify character cues (e.g., LIONEL/LOGUE, LILIBET/LILLIBET) and correct scattered typos like 'Higness' and 'Chuchill' in dialogue and slug lines.

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Would readers champion it · Rewrite depth · Voice · Score stability
What's working 3 of 5 readers agree

The Bertie-Lionel consultation-room relationship is a championable asset that generates consistent warmth, friction, and emotional progression through sharp, class-inflected dialogue.

What's blocking 3 of 5 readers agree

The middle act's reliance on repeated therapy beats and expository political delivery reduces forward momentum and makes the protagonist's arc feel more reported than actively driven.

Would readers champion it?
Not yetNot yetReaders wouldn’t actively push for it.
Early interestEarly interestMentioned, but no real push behind it.
ModeratelyModeratelyMentioned favorably to the right buyer.
StronglyStronglyActively championed across their network.
ClaudeStronglyGPT5StronglyGeminiStronglyGrokStronglyDeepSeekModerately
How much rewrite does it need?
Start from scratchStart from scratchPremise or core engine isn’t working. Page-one rebuild.
Structural rewriteStructural rewriteSpecific acts or zones need rebuilding — not starting over, but significant revision work on those sections.
Targeted rewriteTargeted rewriteSpecific scenes or threads need rework. ~1 month.
Just polishJust polishLines and pacing tweaks. A few weeks.
ClaudeTargeted rewriteDeepSeekTargeted rewriteGPT5Targeted rewriteGeminiJust polishGrokJust polish
How distinctive is the voice?
GenericGenericReads like other scripts in the genre.
EmergingEmergingHints of a distinctive voice, not yet locked in.
DistinctiveDistinctiveA clear, recognizable authorial voice.
One-of-a-kindOne-of-a-kindA voice that couldn’t be anyone else’s.
ClaudeDistinctiveDeepSeekDistinctiveGPT5DistinctiveGeminiDistinctiveGrokDistinctive
Story Facts
Genres:
Drama 70% War 25% Thriller 20% Romance 15% Comedy 10%

Setting: 1925-1939, United Kingdom, primarily London and royal residences

Themes: Overcoming a Speech Impediment, The Importance of Communication and Finding One's Voice, Duty and Responsibility vs. Personal Desire, The Power of Human Connection and Support, Political Intrigue and the Abdication Crisis

Conflict & Stakes: Bertie's struggle with his speech impediment and the expectations of kingship, alongside the political implications of his brother's abdication and the looming threat of war.

Mood: Tense yet hopeful, with moments of warmth and humor.

Standout Features:

  • Unique Hook: The story of a king overcoming a speech impediment to unite a nation during a time of crisis.
  • Character Development: Bertie's transformation from a reluctant leader to a confident king, supported by his therapist and family.
  • Historical Context: The backdrop of the impending World War II and the abdication crisis adds depth and urgency to the narrative.
  • Emotional Resonance: The intimate portrayal of family dynamics and personal struggles creates a relatable and engaging story.

Comparable Scripts: The King's Speech, The Imitation Game, A Beautiful Mind, The Social Network, The Crown, The Pursuit of Happyness, Dead Poets Society, The Help, The Theory of Everything

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