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EXT. ST. LUKE’S HOSPITAL — DAY TOM MALONEY (50s, weary and devoted) climbs the steps slowly, holding the handrail for support. Labored breathing increases as he reaches the fourth floor. He holds a single red rose in his hand, and he sighs as he
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INT. INTERNATIONAL SOLUTIONS — DAY Tom exits the elevator, looks at the time, and rushes toward his desk. As he takes his seat, his BOSS (50s, stern) turns the corner. He pulls a rolling chair beside Tom. BOSS
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INT. TOM AND MARNA’S HOUSE — DAY Tom sits at the kitchen table his computer screen filled with spreadsheets showing bills that are due. He shakes his head, muttering. TOM
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EXT. HOSPITAL — NEXT DAY Tom replaces the rose by her bed, then sits and chats. TOM The kids were in a great mood last night. They miss you a lot.
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EXT. HOSPITAL — DAY The wind howls as the heavy door slams shut behind him. Tom doesn’t flinch. His breath fogs in the cold air, but he doesn’t seem to notice. As he walks toward the parking lot, slow but deliberate, his shoes crunch softly against gravel
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INT. TOM AND MARNA’S HOUSE — NIGHT A soft lamp glows in the corner of the living room, illuminating a game board spread across the floor. It is surrounded by snacks and scattered cards. Tom sits cross-legged with Judy and Ethan. They laugh as
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INT. STAIRCASE — MOMENTS LATER Tom walks them up the stairs, one hand on Judy’s shoulder, the other holding Ethan’s tiny fingers. ETHAN Can she still dream?
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INT. KIDS’ BEDROOMS — LATER Tom tucks Judy in, then Ethan. He sits on the edge of the bed for a moment, brushing Ethan’s hair back. TOM We need to get this mop of yours
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INT. KITCHEN — DAY — CONTINUOUS Morning light spills across the kitchen counter as Tom stands at the stove, flipping pancakes. A small radio plays softly in the background — cheerful music that doesn’t match how he feels. Eggs sizzle. Toast pops up, and he moves like a
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INT. ST. LUKE’S HOSPITAL — DAY Tom climbs the stairs, slower than usual. His knees ache and his breath is shallow, but he keeps going, each step an echo. As he reaches the fourth floor, he glances up — and freezes as the intercom crackles.
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INT. HOSPITAL ROOM 474 — DAY — CONTINUOUS Nurse Debbie grabs Tom’s arm and pulls him aside. NURSE DEBBIE You’ll have to wait, Tom. The doctors are with her now.
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EXT. ST. LUKE’S HOSPITAL — DAY As Tom steps onto the sidewalk, a gentle breeze brushes him, causing a shiver. He shakes his head as if to clear it, then shakes it again. The wind swirls around him, rustling leaves. He listens to
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EXT. ST. CATHERINE’S ELEMENTARY — DAY Tom stands tall and rubs his hands together to keep warm. When he sees the kids coming, he kneels down and spreads his arms wide, embracing them in a big hug. JUDY
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INT. MALONEY HOUSE — DAY As he enters, the phone rings. NURSE DEBBIE (V.O.) Mr. Maloney, this is Debbie from St. Luke’s.

Until Tomorrow

A devoted husband grapples with the agonizing reality of his wife's locked-in syndrome, balancing his love for her with the needs of his children and the pressures of life.

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Overview

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Unique Selling Point

The screenplay stands out for its unique portrayal of a locked-in syndrome patient’s internal struggle and the emotional toll on her family, offering a fresh perspective on grief and resilience. Its focus on the silent communication between Tom and Marna adds depth, making it compelling for audiences who appreciate character-driven narratives.

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Gemini
 Recommend
Claude
 Recommend
DeepSeek
 Recommend
GPT4
 Recommend
Story Facts

Genres: Drama, Family, drama, family

Setting: Contemporary, St. Luke's Hospital and Tom and Marna's home

Themes: Love and Commitment, Grief and Loss, Communication and Connection, Resilience and Hope, Financial and Work Stress

Conflict & Stakes: Tom's struggle to cope with Marna's locked-in syndrome and the emotional impact on their family, with the stakes being Marna's potential recovery and the family's emotional well-being.

Mood: Somber and poignant, with moments of warmth and hope.

Standout Features:

  • Unique Hook: The portrayal of locked-in syndrome and the internal struggle of a character who is aware but unable to communicate.
  • Emotional Depth: The exploration of grief, love, and family dynamics in the face of a loved one's illness.
  • Character Development: Tom's journey from despair to hope as he navigates his wife's condition and his role as a father.

Comparable Scripts: The Fault in Our Stars, A Walk to Remember, Me Before You, The Notebook, Still Alice, The Diving Bell and the Butterfly, The Time Traveler's Wife, Ordinary People, Life as We Know It

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Overall Score: 7.71
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Comparison with Previous Draft

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Version Comparison Analysis
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Improvements (3)
  • Character Complexity - characterArcs: 7.0 → 9.0 +2.0
  • Character Complexity - characterDiversity: 6.0 → 7.0 +1.0
  • Character Complexity - antagonistDevelopment: 5.0 → 6.0 +1.0
Areas to Review (3)
  • Premise - premiseDepth: 9.0 → 8.0 -1.0
  • Story Structure - resolutionSatisfaction: 8.0 → 7.0 -1.0
  • Pacing: 6.0 → 6.0 -0.0